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June 14, 2014

The Ragbox, Chapter 4, Page 1

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PANEL 1
A window with slatted shutters. The early morning sun peaks through the spaces between. On a table underneath the window sits a small brim fedora. Note: all of Mr. Davis’s dialogue will appear as voice over in narration boxes, until noted otherwise.

MR. DAVIS
Two more minutes.

PANEL 2
Close up of an alarm clock reading “5:58.”

MR. DAVIS
Why is it every day I’m waking up two minutes earlier than the day before.

PANEL 3
Close up of MR. DAVIS’S dark eyes. They are open, and appear wet and aging.

MR. DAVIS
Ha… ‘cause the body is telling the mind to stop sleeping through what’s left.

PANEL 4
Same angle. Mr. Davis begins to raise his head from the pillow. We lose sight of most of him.

MR. DAVIS
Okay…

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