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June 11, 2014

The Ragbox, Chapter 3, Page 5

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PANEL 1
Ana runs into the hallway. Roberto stands at the far end, his hand on the knob of the parents’ door, now closed.

ANA
Momma!

ROBERTO
No, Ana!

PANEL 2
Close up of Ana, in horror and grief.

ANA
I heard the door. I thought… I thought…

ROBERTO
It’s just me. Ana, it’s just me.

PANEL 3
Both of them in a wider view. Ana covers her face with her hands.

ANA
I know the sound of that door. I’ll always know that sound.

PANEL 4
Roberto walks towards her. Ana is still freaked out.

ANA
We need some more eggs. I dropped the eggs.

ROBERTO
Come on. It’s just a door.

PANEL 5
The hallway. The parents’ door closed.

ROBERTO
(off left)
And I want it closed from now on. Okay?

ANA
(off panel)
Okay.

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