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June 10, 2014

The Ragbox, Chapter 2, Page 1

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PANEL 1
Close up of Roberto. He wears a dark suit and a tie, loose around his neck. His attention is directed out the window of a short (not a stretch) limousine in which he is a passenger (rear passenger’s side). The limo is passing through the streets of the Ragbox.

PANEL 2
Roberto’s POV. Outside, a couple of young Mexican boys play by a cracked open fire hydrant.

PANEL 3
A wider shot shows Roberto sitting next to Ana in the backseat. Ana wears a black dress. She looks around the rather small limo. Roberto looks out his window.

ANA
Can I open the sunroof?

ROBERTO
No.

PANEL 4
Different angle. Ana examines an electronics panel by her door. The glass wall between them and the driver is down.

ANA
What’s this for?

ROBERTO
The radio.

ROBERTO (CONT’D)
Please don’t turn it on.

ANA
O-kay.

PANEL 5
Roberto leans forward to speak to the driver. Ana holds up a champagne glass from a row of glasses in front of them.

ANA
What’s –

ROBERTO
Champagne. And no. It doesn’t come with the limo.

ROBERTO (CONT’D)
(louder)
Hey… pull over for a minute?

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